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‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

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People still believe that the
Internet
 will never replace traditional course
books
 in schools. In my opinion,
this
 statement is incorrect and I strongly believe that soon
books
 will be out of the education system entirely. The evidence for my statement is provided below.
Firstly
, the
Internet
 is everywhere ranging from the largest cities to the smallest of towns. Nowadays, everybody has access to the
internet
 with just one click. It is cheap and widely available. All textbooks are available free of cost on the
Internet
. Frankly, there is an availability of a wide range of
books
 and articles dated back hundreds of years.
Moreover
, many devices like laptops and tablets are on the market which is student-friendly and much easier to use as compared to old textbooks. Many institutions have already incorporated the use of modern technology into the art of teaching.
For instance
, Australian society has already replaced paperback
books
 with tablets and other electronic devices. The children are instructed to submit assignments and research papers online.
On the other hand
, one may argue that there are drawbacks associated with
this
 new invention. The youth may get addicted and obtain age-inappropriate information online which is detrimental to their upbringing. Young and growing pupils may get distracted from their task at hand and concentrate more on the enormous content available online. In conclusion, even though a majority of the population believes that
books
 will always remain
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the first-hand knowledge provider , I feel that it is no longer the case. Be it for good or for bad,
this
 is something that the world has to accept.
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