In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learninh and taking responsibilities. What are your opinions on this?
Some people believe having a
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, some other people disagree. Making the right choice between these two can be quite important for adolescents. In Linking Words
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essay, I will discuss my opinion of both points of view.
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Students
can prepare their selves for their future jobs by learning useful abilities in different fields, getting familiar with workplaces and practising responsibility. Use synonyms
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students
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, dealing with problems in the workspace has a positive effect on Linking Words
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, they can make them exhausted both mentally and physically so their capabilities will decrease. Linking Words
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, they can face psychological issues in severe cases. Linking Words
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job
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