In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learninh and taking responsibilities. What are your opinions on this?

Some people believe having a

job

while

studying is a valuable experience for children.

On the contrary

, some other people disagree. Making the right choice between these two can be quite important for adolescents. In

this

essay, I will discuss my opinion of both points of view. On the one hand, being engaged in a

job

during high school can come with achieving useful experiences.

Students

can prepare their selves for their future jobs by learning useful abilities in different fields, getting familiar with workplaces and practising responsibility.

For example

, it is proven that participation at work can reinforce teamwork spirit in

students

.

Furthermore

, dealing with problems in the workspace has a positive effect on

students

' creativity. So having a part-

time

job

can be advantageous for teenagers.

On the other hand

, working and studying at the same

time

can reduce adolescents' efficiency. Jobs can fill the

time

that

students

need for practising.

Moreover

, they can make them exhausted both mentally and physically so their capabilities will decrease.

Additionally

, they can face psychological issues in severe cases.

For instance

, a 4-hour

job

in a restaurant, which is a usual

job

for teenagers, can take the

time

they need to study and rest and even the

time

they spend on their hobbies.

Therefore

, their educational efficiency will drop and the possibility of dealing with depression will increase;

due to

the fact that they don't spend

time

on joyful activities. So there are serious disadvantages to

this

theory.

To conclude

,

although

a

job

can be functional for juveniles, it can harm their studies and mental health. In my point of view, a

job

can be functional for

students

unless it damages

students

' main career; education.