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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present
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The given maps illustrate the improvement occurring in the
village
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 of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present. In general, there was a drastic change regarding several public places, particularly in golf and forest park and it made the
village
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 become more modern. Looking into detail, it is apparent that the large farmland and forest park area in the east of the
village
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 in 1995 had been transformed into a golf and tennis area recently.
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, the residential area in the west had been expanded in the west of the
village
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 with more houses for the citizen.
In addition
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, the Shop building in the south of the
village
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 had been replaced by a restaurant facing the
fish
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market
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.
However
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, there was no change regarding the hotel building, but there was a new car park constructed next to the hotel.
Furthermore
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, the
fish
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market
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 located in the south in 1995 had been replaced by luxury apartments along the road.
Likewise
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, the fishing port situated behind the
fish
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market
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 had been moved from the sea. Meanwhile, the café next to the
fish
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market
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 still remained until now.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, fish, market with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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