The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram compares temperature zones of tropical and temperate
mountains
in terms of differences in their distribution and altitudinal range.
It is clear that
tropical mountains
have a wider range of altitude-based temperature zones compared to temperate mountains
, reaching higher altitudes before encountering permanent snow. Overall
, the cultivation of crops and tree limits also
differ significantly between the two mountain types.
In tropical mountains
, the warm zone
extends from sea level to roughly 550 meters
, providing optimal conditions for various tropical crops. As the elevation increases, the temperate zone
, spanning to
about 1,750 Change preposition
apply
meters
, is predominantly utilized for coffee and cocoa plantations. In contrast
, temperate mountains
feature a cool zone
ranging from 0 to 1,500 meters
that accommodates
grain cultivation, potatoes, Change the verb form
accommodate
flax
, and Correct word choice
and flax
marks
the limit for broad-leaf trees.
Continuing upward, the cool Change the verb form
mark
zone
in tropical mountains
, limiting
at 3,000 Wrong verb form
limited
meters
, supports grain cultivation and sets the boundary for broad-leaf trees. Above this
zone
, pine and fir forests thrive between 3,000 and 3,800 meters
, followed by alpine meadows from 3,800 to 4,300 meters
, and permanent snow above 4,300 meters
. In temperate mountains
, however
, spruce forests dominate between 1,500 and 1,750 meters
, while
alpine meadows emerge from 1,750 to 2,750 meters
, and permanent snow begins at 2,750 meters
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