The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.
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The maps compare the changes having been made to a university campus since 2010.
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, some
buildings
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have been replaced with bigger ones. A new road has been built to provide access to the
student
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accommodation
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building, and interestingly the seating area around the
lake
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, shops and restaurant disappeared, which could have been integrated into a part of
student
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facilities in the building. The university campus in 2010 was composed of two main roads to access all
buildings
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: the offices and teaching block in the north, students' residence in the west, the other
accommodation
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building in the south and a restaurant, and shop in the east with the
lake
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and seating area in the middle of the campus.
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, today the university offices and teaching block have been renovated and extended into Science and Art
buildings
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in order. The
student
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residency building in the west has been extended into two attached
buildings
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. The old
student
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accommodation
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in the south is now a building providing students with facilities,
such
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as shops and restaurants
together with
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offices has been relocated here. Since the shops are now in the building, the new
student
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accommodation
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is there with the new road to access. It is obvious that the seating area around the
lake
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has been relocated, but the
lake
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has remained. Its size remains as big as it has been since 2010.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words buildings, student, accommodation, lake with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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