The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day.
The maps compare the changes having been made to a university campus since 2010.
Overall
, some
buildings
have been replaced with bigger ones. A new road has been built to provide access to the
student
accommodation
building, and interestingly the seating area around the
lake
, shops and restaurant disappeared, which could have been integrated into a part of
student
facilities in the building. The university campus in 2010 was composed of two main roads to access all
buildings
: the offices and teaching block in the north, students' residence in the west, the other
accommodation
building in the south and a restaurant, and shop in the east with the
lake
and seating area in the middle of the campus.
However
, today the university offices and teaching block have been renovated and extended into Science and Art
buildings
in order. The
student
residency building in the west has been extended into two attached
buildings
. The old
student
accommodation
in the south is now a building providing students with facilities,
such
as shops and restaurants
together with
offices has been relocated here. Since the shops are now in the building, the new
student
accommodation
is there with the new road to access. It is obvious that the seating area around the
lake
has been relocated, but the
lake
has remained. Its size remains as big as it has been since 2010.
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