The local Council in your city has no funds for repairs and maintanenance of old buildings. It has decided to demolish a historical building to build a software company. Write a letter to the head of Council. In your letter: explain why the building is important suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community suggest a solution to finance the repair

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my concerns regarding the local council's decision to demolish historical buildings to build a software company. First of all, let me introduce myself. I am Navjot Kaur and resident of
this
town
since birth. The historical buildings in the
town
are an integral part
as well as
the heart of the
town
. These buildings represent the history of the city.
Moreover
, these monuments allure many tourists and made
this
town
one of the most renowned
town
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in nearby areas. Even though, the council do not have enough funds to renovate these monuments,
however
,demolishing them is not a solution. I would like to purpose some ideas to save these.
Firstly
, the local council can set some entry fees and collected funds can use to re-vamp these historical sites.
Secondly
, authorities might collect some funds from local residents as well. Hope you would like my suggestions and re-think your decision. Regards Navjot Kaur
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