The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph provides information
of
the Change preposition
on
enquiries
made by the customer to the Tourist Information office over the span of six month
in the year 2011. Change to a plural noun
months
Overall
, there are three types of enquiries
and the
most of Correct article usage
apply
that is
used is by the
telephone and Correct article usage
apply
in person
Add a hyphen
in-person
enquiries
.
In 2011, the two quarters have shown that the enquiries
made by telephone and in person have seen a
tremendous growth over the months compared to the Remove the article
apply
enquiries
made by letter or email. It can be seen that letter or email enquiries
have drastically dropped after the second quarter of 2011.
Significantly, the growth of the other two enquiries
have
boosted since Correct subject-verb agreement
has
april
and by Change the capitalization
April
june
they have topped above 1600 Change the capitalization
June
enquiries
. Moreover
Add a comma
,Moreover
in
Add a hyphen
in-person
person
Add a comma
,person
enquiries
made by the customers haven't shown any data of Correct article usage
a drastical
drastical
drop in the whole six months various compared to the rest of the two Correct your spelling
drastic
enquiries
it
has shown some fall.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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