The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The bar chart provides information on the popularity of four different modes of
transportation
in one
European
city
in three separate years(1960, 1980, and 2000). Obviously,
although
people
in 1960 used
buses
the most, the preference turned to
cars
in 2000. Looking at the data
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1960,
people
in the
European
city
used
buses
as the most common mode of
transportation
. Approximately 40
percent
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of
people
commuted to work by
buses
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bus
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in that year. Following trains and tubes with around 25
percent
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of commuters, less than 10
percent
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of
people
in the
European
city
travelled
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to and from work by
cars
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car
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. Turning to the data
on
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2000,
cars
have become the main
modes
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of
transportation
during the decades. About 40
percent
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of
people
in the
European
city
mainly used
cars
in that year.
On the contrary
, as time goes by, the popularity of
buses
have
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declined to fifteen
percent
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of commuters during the period. Interestingly, Trains and tubes are still made use of stably, regardless of the change between
cars
and
buses
.
To sum up
, the main modes of
transportation
have changed from
buses
to
cars
during the forty years and used subways constantly.
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