The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The bar chart provides information on the popularity of four different modes of
transportation
in one European
city
in three separate years(1960, 1980, and 2000).
Obviously, although
people
in 1960 used buses
the most, the preference turned to cars
in 2000.
Looking at the data on
1960, Change preposition
in
people
in the European
city
used buses
as the most common mode of transportation
. Approximately 40 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
commuted to work by buses
in that year. Following trains and tubes with around 25 Fix the agreement mistake
bus
percent
of commuters, less than 10 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
in the European
city
travelled
to and from work by Wrong verb form
travel
cars
.
Turning to the data Fix the agreement mistake
car
on
2000, Change preposition
from
cars
have become the main modes
of Fix the agreement mistake
mode
transportation
during the decades. About 40 percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
people
in the European
city
mainly used cars
in that year. On the contrary
, as time goes by, the popularity of buses
have
declined to fifteen Change the verb form
has
percent
of commuters during the period. Interestingly, Trains and tubes are still made use of stably, regardless of the change between Change the spelling
per cent
cars
and buses
.
To sum up
, the main modes of transportation
have changed from buses
to cars
during the forty years and used subways constantly.Submitted by ka.ki.ku.ke.kohei0827 on
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