The table below show the results of a survey of the number of participatns in eight sports and the amount of time spent on each sport per month. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The provided table illustrates statistical information concerning the
number
of participating students in eight sports and the hours
spent over a month.
As is seen from the chart given, the number
of football
participants is the highest, and the time
consumed to play basketball
is the longest. Whereas
golf participant numbers are the lowest, and football
participating hour is the shortest.
In the number
of participants, three sports such
as football
, rugby, and basketball
, are the highest, and there are over 100 people. Golf participation numbers are only 15 peoples. However
, the time
spent is over 1.5 times longer than in football
and rugby. And golf spent time
is double the number
of participations as well as
Skating.
In the time
consumed per month, only one sport, basketball
, is over 150 hours
, and other sports are under 50 hours
. The rank of running is the second highest, and the time
spent running is 50 hours
. Basketball
time
is triple running time
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, football, time, basketball with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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