The table below show the results of a survey of the number of participatns in eight sports and the amount of time spent on each sport per month. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The table below show the results of a survey of the number of participatns in eight sports and the amount of time spent on each sport per month.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The provided table illustrates statistical information concerning the
number
of participating students in eight sports and the
hours
spent over a month. As is seen from the chart given, the
number
of
football
participants is the highest, and the
time
consumed to play
basketball
is the longest.
Whereas
golf participant numbers are the lowest, and
football
participating hour is the shortest. In the
number
of participants, three sports
such
as
football
, rugby, and
basketball
, are the highest, and there are over 100 people. Golf participation numbers are only 15 peoples.
However
, the
time
spent is over 1.5 times longer than in
football
and rugby. And golf spent
time
is double the
number
of participations
as well as
Skating. In the
time
consumed per month, only one sport,
basketball
, is over 150
hours
, and other sports are under 50
hours
. The rank of running is the second highest, and the
time
spent running is 50
hours
.
Basketball
time
is triple running
time
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, hours, football, time, basketball with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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