The diagram below show the process of producing photographs using digital equipments.
The provided diagram illustrates the process of producing photographs using digital equipment
such
as a digital camera
, computer, and printer.
As can be seen from the diagram, there are three stages in the process, beginning with capturing and recording an image using a digital camera
and culminating in printing paper.
In the beginning stage, there occur capturing images
using a digital camera
, and the images
are stored on a smart card.
Besides
, recording videos also
can be done using a digital camera
and stored on a smart card.
And then
, the captured images
are downloaded on a computer.
Next,
the images
are edited, such
as cutting, improving, and formatting on a computer.
The edited images
can be sent by e-mail or stored on CD.
In the subsequent stage, the edited images
can be printed on photo paper using a printer.
The printed photos can be color
photos or black-and-white photos.Change the spelling
colour
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