You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter describe what the problem was. tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it. suggest your own solution to the problem.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about some issues that
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encountered
while
using the swimming
pool
at Oxford Road. There are several problems faced at the town all swimming pools in reading, one of which is the dirtiness of the
pool
. Recently, I noticed that the water in the
pool
has a different colour which is far from white,
this
means that it has not been changed for a
while
. To add to
this
, I observed that the bins are not being changed often, leaving the area untidy.
This
can limit the number of customers who come to swim here because it can be detrimental to their health. I tried reporting
this
issue to the staff on duty, but in return, she insulted me and did nothing about the situation.
additionally
, an email was sent by me to the manager, but for the past two weeks, I have not received a response. In my opinion, the ideal solution to
this
would be to inform the staff responsible for cleaning the
pool
area to ensure that the water is changed regularly, and litter should as well be taken care of. I
also
suggest that a signpost stating that the environment should be kept clean at all times can be enforced. I would really appreciate it if you look into
this
matter urgently. I hope to receive a response from you Yours Faithfully, Mgbemere Diana.
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