You use the local swimming pool often, and during one of your visits, you encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter describe what the problem was. tell what the swimming pool staff have done about it. suggest your own solution to the problem.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about some issues that
i
encountered Change the capitalization
I
while
using the swimming pool
at Oxford Road.
There are several problems faced at the town all swimming pools in reading, one of which is the dirtiness of the pool
. Recently, I noticed that the water in the pool
has a different colour which is far from white, this
means that it has not been changed for a while
. To add to this
, I observed that the bins are not being changed often, leaving the area untidy. This
can limit the number of customers who come to swim here because it can be detrimental to their health.
I tried reporting this
issue to the staff on duty, but in return, she insulted me and did nothing about the situation. additionally
, an email was sent by me to the manager, but for the past two weeks, I have not received a response.
In my opinion, the ideal solution to this
would be to inform the staff responsible for cleaning the pool
area to ensure that the water is changed regularly, and litter should as well be taken care of. I also
suggest that a signpost stating that the environment should be kept clean at all times can be enforced.
I would really appreciate it if you look into this
matter urgently. I hope to receive a response from you
Yours Faithfully,
Mgbemere Diana.Submitted by dianabemere22 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite