some people think that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writing can be stored electronically. other thin that printed books still play important roles. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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of printed
books
or electronic
version
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is debatable. Some
people
believe that traditional
books
are vital
other
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others
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are of the opinion to use the
books
available online.
However
, I believe that
old
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version
is crucial, but in
this
paragraph, I would like to discuss both views, followed by my opinion.
Firstly
, Printed
books
are vital for those who
lives
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in rural areas and there is no internet connection
hence
, they can read their
favorite
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journals any time without any issue.
Moreover
,
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books
can be stored for longer
period
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periods
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of time and
it
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apply
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can be borrowed from libraries. Another reason is
book worms
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loves
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the signature set of old
books
which stimulate
there
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their
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reading impulses.
Apart from
this
, readers create an emotional attachment
with
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books
they
also
love the smell of
papers
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paper
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which is really hard to find in
online
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version
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.
Secondly
, some
people
love the online
version
of
books
, they do not need to buy
books
as a result
the storage problem is
also
solved.
However
, e-
books
are easy to download and can be saved in USB Drives which
is
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are
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easy to carry from one place to another.
For instance
, A study shows that in Canada and Australia, colleges and universities rely on online education.
Hence
, it proves it
as
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eco- friendly
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eco-friendly
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, because there is no need to cut
the
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tress
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trees
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. Another reason for the popularity of electronic
books
is
people
can adjust the light and font which they do not find in paper-based
books
. To
be conclude
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, no doubt Both
the
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versions have their own merits and demerits but no one can diminish the value of printed
books
because it has
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place in
people
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hearts.
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