Some people believe that only the government can bring about significant changes in society, while others think that even an individual can have a lot of influence on society. What is your opinion on the above statement? You should take about 40 minutes for this answer and write a minimum of 250 words.
it is often advocated that the leadership of a country holds the supreme power in its hands to be able to change
society
for the better and get rid of all its cons. However
, this
view is flawed in my opinion as I believe that without the cooperation of every individual, there is only so much the government
can do for society
’s betterment. The government
can make strong policies and can mobilise resources for their execution, but the policy only yields the desired results
when it is acted upon by all members of society
. If the policy has been set in place, but no one acts in accordance with it, then
it will never be able to achieve its stated primary objective. For instance
, of late, many countries have come up with policies aligned with the goal of achieving lower carbon emissions by 2025. However
, the individuals living in those countries assume a reckless attitude and hardly abide by the policy for curbing climate change. Hence
, without individuals’ cooperation, the government
cannot achieve any positive results
. Moreover
, the government
’s efforts are often focused on driving results
on a macro scale (nationwide). In contrast
, an individual’s efforts will show results
on a micro-level and can immediately lead to the betterment of society
. The ruling party cannot become aware of all the problems their society
faces in many regions. However
, the people of the region will be well aware of the problems existing in their region. Thus
, the individual holds more power to bring about immediate change in their locality with the help of the resources mobilised by the government
on a large scale. For instance
, if there is a flood in an Indian state, and the government
comes up with an immediate disaster relief response, these efforts will bear more fruit when the individuals of the region cooperate in the rescue operations rather than leaving it all up to the politicians and their forces. In conclusion, I believe that individuals can bring about a more immediate impact on society
when they work in tandem with the government
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion