Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear John, I hope

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message finds you well. I am just writing to let you know that the schedule of my

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training is changed from next month to

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weekend, which is the same date

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our movie booked day. I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t think I can go with you anymore.

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, I have someone to recommend you to go with. He is my cousin who loves action movies like you.

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, I think both of you will get along well and have a good time together in the

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, he has a car and his house is not far from where you live, so he can drive you to the cinema. Honestly, he likes to meet people and service them as he works in the customer service department. If you have any questions about him don’t hesitate to ask me. Let me know if you would like to go

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a movie with him,

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I will give you his contact. I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Tim

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To enhance your letter, consider elaborating a bit more on why your cousin is excited to go with your friend to establish a stronger connection.

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Be mindful of using more varied transitional phrases to further strengthen the flow between sentences and ideas.

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The letter addresses all parts of the task effectively, providing clear explanations and solutions.

coherence cohesion

The structure of the letter is logically organized, with clear paragraphs and transitions between ideas.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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