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Some say that news has no connection with most people's life and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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Some individuals are of the belief that there is no connection between
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 and the majority of people's life,
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 spending time on the press
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 as reading newspapers and watching the
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 on TV is a waste.
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 is a viewpoint with which I partially disagree for a number of justifications. On the one hand, the press information that individuals are exposed to every minute in different media can have no connection with people's lives for the main reason of fake
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. Primarily, nowadays with the advent of online media distinction between real one and fake
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 is very challenging for professional ankers who are specialised rather than the normal public who are gullible easily
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 they can rely on a video about a former armed rubbery in other countries as a new case in their town.
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, the direct and indirect impact of reports on society members is inevitable.
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, considering the influence of
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 on lives they should trust authorised sources as their
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 feed ,not any online website or social media posts since the mental impact of those fake
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 on any subject is huge.
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, reading up-to-date headlines on different subjects
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 as the economy of sports has its positive point
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 being aware of the trade market is very helpful in one's economic decisions and making money both in gaining interests or avoiding damage. In conclusion, some might argue that there is no connection between most people's lives and it is a waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television
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 programs since everyone is exposed to fake
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 and it's hard to split them. In my opinion;
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,
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 idea is not rather groundless for above mentioned reasons.
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