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New technologies present children with new possibilities and potential dangers. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of technology on children in today’s society.

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Currently, there are benefits and harmful effects of the usage of
devices
 with contemporary technology for our
children
 with various features offered. In
this
 essay, I will elaborate on my points of view regarding
this
 phenomenon in our
children
’s daily lives. It is true that some people said that playing a game on a device will make
children
 much more creative, build self-confidence, and encourage curious behaviour in the next period.
However
, in the long run, overuse the using of gadgets will cause disadvantages for them. In my opinion, the growing faster
devices
 users
children
 is
due to
 lack of supervision from their parents and
this
 leads to
children
 spending many
hours
 playing with the gadget without any controls so there are possibilities that they should commence learning how to read and write for the preparation entering elementary school. In
this
 case, they will persistently play a game on the gadget they hold and be reluctant to socialize and interact with their peers, and
this
 could lead to less isolation and becoming less emphatic in the future.
Besides
, devoted
hours
 on
devices
 will sacrifice the time they should spend with other
children
 to learn basic social skills, play with traditional toys, and how
to
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behave
according to
 society’s values.
Furthermore
, if
children
 perpetually use gadgets for many
hours
 in a day,
this
 could lead to irritation in their eyes and other health mental problems. To overcome
this
 problem, parents should give adequate supervision to their
children
 when using electronic
devices
 and restricted the number of
hours
 a day and should encourage them to play with their peers to know society better. In conclusion, I contend that current technology development gives more adverse impacts on
children
 than benefits they offered so parents should limit the time allowed for
children
 to play a game on a device.
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