The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles
Overall
, the supplied black and white pictorial flow chart represents the procedure for recycling plastic
containers. There are total nine steps of producing new stuff. They are: collecting, loading, sorting in recycling centre, compressing into blocks, crushing, producing plastic
pellets, forming raw materials and producing end products.
At first glance, it can be observed that how the plastic
bottles from dustbin are taken to the recycling factory and different new products are produced for example
: tiffine box, T-shirts, jug, stationary items such
as pen, pencil and so on.
It is very interesting to see that all the garbages are taken out from trashbin and loaded in the truck. Then
, all the trashes are taken to the reprocessing industry for sorting. There, all the modifiable and non-modifiable wastes are kept seperately in different boxes. After that, flexible things are compressed into hard blocks. Those hard blocks are now crushed in a wheel and washed properly. Now, clean pressed items are put into a machine to make plastic
pellets. Those are then
heated to form a raw material. Finally
, all the new basic matter are now used to prepare fashionable objects.Submitted by po.koirala11 on
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