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Some experts believe that it is better for children to beign learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

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Learning a foreign
language
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 has become a trend in current education.
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, it is important for kids to learn it as soon as possible. Some experts think that the best time to learn it is by the
age
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 of 5 to 12 when the brain is still in the developing phase. I believe that the advantages of learning a new
language
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 between these ages outweigh all of the possible drawbacks that exist. It is widely known that an infant's brain started to understand
language
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 from the
age
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 of 1 month.
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, most kids spelt out their first words by the
age
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 of 12 months. Researchers have suggested that the young ones need to learn their mother
language
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 exclusively from the
age
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 of 1 to 3 years old, since during
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 period,
children
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's brains have the capability to learn more than 100.000 new
vocabularies
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 each year.
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, when
children
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 entered primary school, their brains are ready to receive new knowledge, which in
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 case is a new
language
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. Learning a new
language
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 has almost always been considered beneficial and by learning a foreign
language
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 from an early
age
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,
children
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 can get used to the bilingual situation and adapt faster compare to someone who learns the
language
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 at an older
age
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.
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, a child who migrated to a foreign country between the
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 of 5 to 10 showed no difficulty in adapting to their new education, even though it is provided in a different
language
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. Sadly, the same thing could not be said for their parents. 
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,
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 there were a few cases where
children
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 find it difficult to learn two different languages simultaneously.
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, it only occurs if the kids have not mastered their mother
language
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 before they started to introduce to the new
language
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.
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, it is better to learn a new
language
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 at an early
age
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.
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