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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There would be tremendous difficulties a
person
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 could face either social or practical problems. In
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 it is not that simple to live in a foreign
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. As we all know , folk goes there to study , work or living purposes. It is absolutely essential to have a knowledge
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 the
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country
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language
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. Dealing with local dwellers would be complicated.
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, when
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 American go to the united kingdom, he would not understand the British accent,
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 he has grown
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used to
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 accent.
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 , communication can be
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 worry for that
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.
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 , when a local habitant invites you
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 a party , you visit there but you cannot understand what they speak ad you feel
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dumb.
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 speaking a local
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 an important role in socializing.
On the other hand
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 , a
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 could feel culture shock.
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, when they leave their mother
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 and
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 loved ones potentially they fall for mental stress. In order that
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 could be a barrier for them to understand or communicate.
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 , when a
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go
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 to a supermarket if he doesn’t know to read the item label or ask someone about product availability or details.
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 undeniable to know the
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. living in a foreign
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 is not plain sailing
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.
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,
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 an essential for immigrants to have a certain knowledge
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 the
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. In conclusion ,
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folk residing in a foreign
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 cause to face many
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 problems , and I strongly agree with
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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