The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese.
The given figure shows the general steps in producing softer variants of
cheese
. As can be seen from the diagram, the process
consists of 5 steps with two types of general action done which is mixing and heating the liquid mixture
until it became thick
liquid Add an article
a thick
that is
known as a soft cheese
.
At the first stage
of process
, a Add an article
the process
mixture
of water and milk is created before being cooled down. The mixture
temperature
is brought down by placing them in a
storage with Remove the article
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the
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a
temperature
of 5 degrees celcius
for two hours. After the Correct your spelling
celsius
mixture
is cool enough, salt is added before the mixture
is fermented at a
room Correct article usage
apply
temperature
for the same duration as the cooling process
.
As the soft cheese
need
to be quite thick, the Change the verb form
needs
moisture
in the mixture
is evaporated by putting them in
a boiling Change preposition
at
temperature
of 100 celcius
for eight hours. Correct your spelling
celsius
This
process
let the moisture
to
turn into steam which will let the worker separate the unneeded Fix the infinitive
apply
moisture
easily. Finally
, the mixture
is entering the last
step which is a simultaneous step of second cooling and filtration to separate the evaporated moisture
and soft cheese
that
is possible to do because of the preceding Correct pronoun usage
which
process
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