The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese.
The given figure shows the general steps in producing softer variants of
cheese
. As can be seen from the diagram, the Use synonyms
process
consists of 5 steps with two types of general action done which is mixing and heating the liquid Use synonyms
mixture
until it became Use synonyms
thick
liquid Add an article
a thick
that is
known as a soft Linking Words
cheese
.
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At the first stage
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process
, a Add an article
the process
mixture
of water and milk is created before being cooled down. The Use synonyms
mixture
Use synonyms
temperature
is brought down by placing them in Use synonyms
a
storage with Remove the article
apply
the
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a
temperature
of 5 degrees Use synonyms
celcius
for two hours. After the Correct your spelling
celsius
mixture
is cool enough, salt is added before the Use synonyms
mixture
is fermented at Use synonyms
a
room Correct article usage
apply
temperature
for the same duration as the cooling Use synonyms
process
.
As the soft Use synonyms
cheese
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need
to be quite thick, the Change the verb form
needs
moisture
in the Use synonyms
mixture
is evaporated by putting them Use synonyms
in
a boiling Change preposition
at
temperature
of 100 Use synonyms
celcius
for eight hours. Correct your spelling
celsius
This
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process
let the Use synonyms
moisture
Use synonyms
to
turn into steam which will let the worker separate the unneeded Fix the infinitive
apply
moisture
easily. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
mixture
is entering the Use synonyms
last
step which is a simultaneous step of second cooling and filtration to separate the evaporated Linking Words
moisture
and soft Use synonyms
cheese
Use synonyms
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that
is possible to do because of the preceding Correct pronoun usage
which
process
.Use synonyms
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