The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.

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The charts present data on the processing of byproducts done by three different

countries

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: the Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the United Kingdom divided into five types of

treatment

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including recycling, chemical

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, burning, and dumping underground or underwater. Generally, the

method

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that is

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used the most totally by all the

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is dumping the waste underground with dumping underground present in all three

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countries

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high-ranked

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method

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methods

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, each of them has different detail on the composition of the

method

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used. Looking at the details, both Sweden and the Republic of Korea utilize the same three methods of dumping underground, burning, and recycling with different rates of usage. Swedish people prioritize dumping underground

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more than half of the rate

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while

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recycling and burning have a similar rate of only a quarter of the share.

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in Korea, recycling is the preferred

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with an almost 70 percent rate over dumping underground and burning.

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, for the United

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the methods are more varied which include dumping underground, underwater, burning, and chemical

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. Compared to other

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, the United Kingdom

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has the same most used

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of waste

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as Sweden which is to dump their waste underground, with a huge gap of 82% in comparison to the other methods which if combined only adds up to a mere 18%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, treatment, method with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Many believe that being good at a sport is result of talent while others think that it comes from hard work. Discuss both views and give your reasons.

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