The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.
The charts present data on the processing of byproducts done by three different
countries
: the Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the United Kingdom divided into five types of treatment
including recycling, chemical treatment
, burning, and dumping underground or underwater.
Generally, the method
that is
used the most totally by all the countries
is dumping the waste underground with dumping underground present in all three countries
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countries'
method
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methods
However
, each of them has different detail on the composition of the method
that is
used.
Looking at the details, both Sweden and the Republic of Korea utilize the same three methods of dumping underground, burning, and recycling with different rates of usage. Swedish people prioritize dumping underground with
more than half of the rateChange preposition
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,
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apply
while
recycling and burning have a similar rate of only a quarter of the share. While
in Korea, recycling is the preferred method
with an almost 70 percent rate over dumping underground and burning.
Lastly
, for the United Kingdom
the methods are more varied which include dumping underground, underwater, burning, and chemical Add a comma
,Kingdom
treatment
. Compared to other countries
, the United Kingdom also
has the same most used method
of waste treatment
as Sweden which is to dump their waste underground, with a huge gap of 82% in comparison to the other methods which if combined only adds up to a mere 18%.Submitted by febrinhidayat on
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