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It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.

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Residents of a foreign country should gain knowledge of the traditions and norms of the place where they reside. Getting history awareness may help those to unite with the local civilians more wisely. Admittedly, it is vital for one to not forget their own history and culture, but it would be beneficial for someone to have a cultural understanding of the place where they are living temporarily.
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 is important to get mixed up with the local civilians over there and to give them respect by showing some interest in their traditions. If a person travelling to Dubai over a work permit of two years,
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 he/she should spare some time to learn basic words like Hello, Goodbye, how are you and others in the Arabic language.
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, read about their independence, national hero, rulers and others. Apart from that, if a resident possesses a certain amount of information about the past of the country and their norms, there are minimal chances that someone over there can fool you. As there are both honest and cheat people present in every country, being blank about something gives them an opportunity to take advantage of you. If someone asks them to guide you to the best place to visit, they may suggest the one where they live to make some money from you. Ideally, it should be normal to know about the area where you are staying presently so that the stay is convenient for you.
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 can enhance your experience, as you may learn something new every time you visit new locations.
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