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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr Walker, I am writing to apply for the
post
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 of Quality Assurance Manager, which was advertised on the Student Affairs Office notice board on 2 September 2016. I believe that my qualifications, personal character and work experience make me a perfect candidate for
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 job.
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 I am studying
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M.B.A.
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 program at the Loren Brusque University, graduating in 2017. I’m studying subjects that are relevant to the offered
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.
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, I constantly perfect my management skills by taking various additional courses. During my
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 I have held the
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 of Junior Executive at «Hansel's Corporation» and improved my leadership skills, communication
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 and ability to work in a team. While leading and supervising subordinates, I gained
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valuable experience for the
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 of Quality Assurance Manager. I am available for
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 at any time. You can contact me most easily by the mobile phone number given above. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the nearest future. Yours sincerely, Paul Carter
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