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You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, Say how you found out about the plans Explain what problems your neighborhood will face Suggest some possible solutions to those problems.

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to express my honest opinion regarding the newly proposed airport project in
Delta
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the Delta
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 community region. When I was reading the the
last
 April newsletter, I saw the details of
this
 new facility and
also
, the pre-construction planning steps of the project. After carefully going through it I was unhappy with some issues that are going to arise parallel to the project.
Furthermore
, I believe constructing an airport in
Delta
 will generate some drawbacks to our neighbourhood as well.
This
 will surely result in increasing existing traffic in
Dellta
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Delta
.
On the other hand
, will lead to an increase in the noise and sound pollution
level
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 in our area.
Moreover
, as to the plan, the proposed lighting system is going to affect the
Delta
 public parking negatively. By considering all the above facts, I think building an airport in
Delta
 is not a good idea.
However
, I would like to suggest, finding bare land in a rural area which can be easily accessed via the Canada 01 highway. Please take a moment to go through my consideration regarding
this
 matter. Thank you, Yours Faithfully, Jimmy Silva
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task achievement
Try to provide a little more detail on the specific problems the neighborhood will face. For instance, mention how the increased traffic will disrupt daily life or the specific effects of noise and light pollution on residents.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the paragraphs transition smoothly from one idea to another. For example, after presenting a problem, immediately follow up with a suggestion for solving it in the same paragraph.
task achievement
The letter has a clear and polite tone, which is appropriate for addressing local authorities.
coherence cohesion
The closing and greeting are well-structured, adding a professional touch to the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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