The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
The above pie charts display the ways that three different nations used to manage dangerous
waste
products.
Overall
, it is evident that most of
this
waste
in
Sweden
and the United Kingdom (
UK
) is handled underground,
while
recycling is the most common measure in the
Republic
of
Korea
. To be more specific, the underground
method
is dominant in
Sweden
and
UK
, accounting for 55% and 82% respectively,
whereas
only 22% of the hazardous
waste
is applied to
this
method
in the
Republic
of
Korea
.
Although
incineration is the tertiary
method
in
Sweden
, comprising 20% of the total, it is still two times higher than that in the
Republic
of
Korea
. The
UK
rarely handles
waste
by fire, only accounts for 2% of dangerous
waste
are treated
this
way. In fact, recycling is the most common way in the
Republic
of
Korea
as more than two-thirds of the
waste
products there are recycled, having a significantly larger proportion than that of
Sweden
, which only accounts for a quarter. The
UK
does not use the recycling
method
to treat dangerous
waste
products.
However
, it has two alternatives that the other two countries do not have, including chemical treatment and dumping
waste
at sea with both accounting for 8% respectively.
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