The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
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The above pie charts display the ways that three different nations used to manage dangerous
waste
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products.
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, it is evident that most of
this
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waste
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in
Sweden
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and the United Kingdom (
UK
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) is handled underground,
while
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recycling is the most common measure in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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. To be more specific, the underground
method
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is dominant in
Sweden
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and
UK
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, accounting for 55% and 82% respectively,
whereas
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only 22% of the hazardous
waste
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is applied to
this
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method
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in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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.
Although
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incineration is the tertiary
method
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in
Sweden
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, comprising 20% of the total, it is still two times higher than that in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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. The
UK
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rarely handles
waste
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by fire, only accounts for 2% of dangerous
waste
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are treated
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way. In fact, recycling is the most common way in the
Republic
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of
Korea
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as more than two-thirds of the
waste
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products there are recycled, having a significantly larger proportion than that of
Sweden
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, which only accounts for a quarter. The
UK
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does not use the recycling
method
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to treat dangerous
waste
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products.
However
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, it has two alternatives that the other two countries do not have, including chemical treatment and dumping
waste
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at sea with both accounting for 8% respectively.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, sweden, uk, republic, korea, method with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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