The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.
Overall
, the colourful pie chart shows the ideas of trash disposal in three different nations (the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom). At first glance, it can be clearly observed that the Republic of Korea uses the maximum
waste
for recycling purposes.
However
, we can see exactly the opposite trend in the United Kingdom as
this
country does not recycle any garbages at all.
Further
, a quarter of the total rubbish is recycled in Sweden.
Moreover
, the UK dispose
maximum
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waste
product under the ground.
Similarly
, Sweden
also
uses the same idea to discard more than half garbage. But, less than a quarter
waste
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is disposed
underground
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by the Koreans.
In addition
, the Swiss use the incineration method more than the Korean and British people.
Nevertheless
, the UK experience two more unique methods to
dispose
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waste
. Eight per cent of trash is managed by chemical treatment and two per cent of trash is dumped at sea.
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