The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.

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, the colourful pie chart shows the ideas of trash disposal in three different nations (the Republic of Korea, Sweden and the United Kingdom). At first glance, it can be clearly observed that the Republic of Korea uses the maximum

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for recycling purposes.

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, we can see exactly the opposite trend in the United Kingdom as

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country does not recycle any garbages at all.

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, a quarter of the total rubbish is recycled in Sweden.

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, the UK dispose

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waste

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product under the ground.

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, Sweden

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uses the same idea to discard more than half garbage. But, less than a quarter

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waste

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is disposed

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by the Koreans.

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, the Swiss use the incineration method more than the Korean and British people.

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, the UK experience two more unique methods to

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waste

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. Eight per cent of trash is managed by chemical treatment and two per cent of trash is dumped at sea.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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158 words

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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they di their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another county if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?

Directors of organizations receive higher salaries than the ordinary worker. Some people think it is necessary while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with each other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?