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The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
#tourists #caribbean #island
The line graph provides information about the
number
 of
tourists
 who visited a specific island called
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the
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Caribbean over 7 years.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the total
number
 of
tourists
showd
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showed
upward
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an upward
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 trend over the given period.
In addition
, the
number
 of visitors who stayed on
island
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the island
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 and on
cruis
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cruise
 ships showed increased
,
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and reach the peak, unchanged, lowest point at
certain
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a certain
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 year. Looking at the chart in more detail, the total of
tourists
 who visited the Caribbean from 2010 to 2015 showed
gradually
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a gradually
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 raised approximately from 1 to 2.8
million
tourists
. From 2015 to 2016 the graph
recored
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recorded
record
 unaltered at almost 2.8
million
tourists
 and in the next year went up to about 3.5
million
tourists
.
Furthermore
, the
tourists
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number of tourists
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 who stayed on
island
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the island
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 from 2010 to 2011 was constant
almost
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at almost
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 0.7
million
tourists
 and
then
 increased from 2013 to 2015 the chart
recored
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recorded
record
 stable numbers
about
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of about
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 1.5
million
tourists
 and from 2016 to 2017 was lowest than
who
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those who
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 stayed on cruise ships.
In contrast
, the
number
 of
tourists
 who stayed on cruise ships in
in
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apply
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2012 reach
the
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a
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lowset
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lowest
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 point
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of
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approximately 0.2
million
tourists
, and after that graph
recored
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recorded
record
 dramatically increased from 2012 to 2017 from almost 0.2 to 2 0.2
million
tourists
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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