A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with reference to your article asking for feedback about the
book
which influenced me the most. The name of the
book
, which left an impression on me, is Atlas of Middle Earth. It is an extensive and illustrated
book
written by an amazing writer, Karen Fonstad, who explains the geography of the places in the famous Lord of the Rings trilogy. The atlas has very detailed explanations of the fictional regions and locations and it sheds light on the missing parts. I have always been a great Tolkien books fan and
this
atlas clarified all the areas that were confusing to me. I am quite surprised by the effort that was put into creating the illustrations and the amount of research that has taken place to explain the maps. I certainly believe
this
book
will amaze people like me, who are interested in middle earth and the Tolkien
book
series. Yours faithfully,
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  • also
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
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  • despite

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