Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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sports rather than individual sports.

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solo exercises can help people to reshape their

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efficiently, I still agree that not only can

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activities strengthen

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physique

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but

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it can reinforce

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of teamwork which has participated an important part in human development. There are two main reasons why it could be argued that dwellers can gain more benefits by having motions alone.

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, exercising by oneself will establish an environment which

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others disturbance.

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, individuals who are doing

sport

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in gyms do not need to communicate with strangers, which can make them

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on strengthening themselves.

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, it is convenient that

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sport by oneself. In

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fast-paced society, personal time is occupied by commuting or trivial

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, which means that it is

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to gather a group of teammates who have similar

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. For those individuals, solo motions

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to

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only way to entertainment.

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,

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sports play a significant role in the history of mankind. For one thing, doing motions together can improve the ability

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cooperation

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.

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, the members

in

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a

team

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game always have different duties, which are decided by their own capacities, helping them to improve their collaboration.

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, dwellers can meet more different friends

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those physical activities which will expand their social circle

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totally consist of strangers who have

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hobbies and teamwork skills. In conclusion, companies and governments have higher

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about

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their employees’ cooperative ability in

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globalizing world which means individuals should spend more time

to take

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part in group activities.