You are planning to travel and would like someone to take care of your apartment while you are away. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter •explain why you will be away •ask your friend to take care of your apartment •describe the tasks you want your friend to do Begin your letter as follows: Dear……

#travel #someone #care #apartment #friend #•explain #•ask #•describe #tasks #dear……

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Dear Kaswa I am writing

this

letter regarding a matter which concerns me significantly,

conversely

, I surmise you can help me with it. I am all set to leave for an adventurous camping holiday with my classmates.

Finally

, I would be able to not only relax in the serene environment of the Hunza mountains but

also

explore the tranquil valleys and lakes in the neighbourhood. I want you to look after my apartment

while

I am away.You live just a few blocks away from my place,

subsequently

, I opine it will not bother you.

Moreover

,you used to visit my place every evening to gab with me,so it will be just like your daily routine.

Lastly

, I can't trust anyone else with

this

colossal responsibility other than you. I want you to make sure that neither unnecessary lights are on nor the water heating system is left on after use.

Furthermore

,keep in touch with my helper and assign him cleaning and washing tasks daily.Either contact him daily to get work updates or visit my place during his working hours.I will surely treat you to lunch once I come back. Thank you Best regards Ahmad Hassan Nadeem

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

189 words

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