You are currently attending a course which is not the same as per the description in the admission brochure. Write a letter to the headmaster. In your letter, state which course you are enrolled in provide details about the noted differences suggest what actions would you like him to take

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing

this

letter to express my disappointment with the syllabus content mentioned in the admission brochure . I had made my decision to take admitted to the diploma

course

in your institute based on the description provided in the

course

brochure .

However

, when classes started a few days back there is no mention of internet security and its importance . It was surprising to learn that it was mentioned as a semester 1 syllabus but there is no lecture has been taken so far.

Therefore

, I request you to kindly arrange lectures on internet security and its importance as soon as possible for semester 1 students . As

That is

an important chapter in the diploma

course

. Already one month has passed and there is no class has been conducted for that chapter. I

also

like to inform you that there is a lot of confusion among students regarding the

course

syllabus . please take a session on why there is a mismatch in the

course

admission brochure and actual

course

content. I look forward to hearing your response. Yours faithfully, John Morrison

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5Linking words
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1Word repetition
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0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

191 words

9.00

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Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

Brochure discrepancies
Enrollment details
Description mismatch
Learning outcomes
Course modules
Expectations unmet
Instructor qualifications
Additional resources
Compensatory measures
Constructive feedback
Proactive solutions
Educational objectives
Resolution proposal
Amicable discussion
Immediate attention
Forthcoming response

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