The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps below given illustrates the before and after of an island which proposed redevelopment for tourism proposes.
Overall
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, as can be seen, the island experienced complete changes. Before redevelopment, it was empty without any basic facilities. After the reconstruction, it transformed into a more rural area with some sort amount of amenities that are needed for tourism.
To begin
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, the green areas with some trees, have remained,
while
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a restaurant and a reception are constructed in the centre of the island.
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, on the west side, the beach has remained and a swimming area is added as well. looking at the west and the east sides of the restaurant and the reception, some accommodations are installed for tourists.
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, a footpath are added all around the village to make more access for visitors. Just to the south of the reception, two boats and a pier are established for entertainment reasons.
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