The digital age has made the gap between the younger and older generations wider. Give reasons for your own answer.

With the advent of technology, a huge gap has happened between different ages from past to present. Young people and the old population get involved in new digital devices. I think new generations need to use it and they are not able to do a lot of things without a modern digital approach. From my point of view, almost 70 years ago there were not any communication tools.
For example
, there were no smartphones, the internet, televisions and computers.
As a result
, as if old folks and youngsters were in the same era.
In contrast
, older people feel that using technology is so hard to learn and understand.
On the other hand
, they want to know and ask teenagers about how to work the devices because all things are done via the internet and cell phones. In my opinion, the intelligence
that is
used in electronic tools has been challenged by the elderly. As if, the present generation were born with digital intelligence.
For instance
, many children that are under 10 know how to use a range of equipment
such
as tablets, laptops, digital cameras and so forth.
However
, our grandmothers and grandfathers did not have any knowledge about electronic devices and after a
while
, they were surrounded by a series of digital marketing so they felt that lost their connection with their children which is why they got older and older day after day
while
their children were growing rapidly. They feel that they are in a big competition and they are big losers. Taking everything into conclusion, modern technologies have made a long distance for the old public to adapt themselves in order to get to know and use
this
issue.
Although
, there are many rages of strikes to help them, but
also
afraid of using high-tech compared with youngsters
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital age
  • gap
  • younger generation
  • older generation
  • technological advancements
  • rapid pace of change
  • overwhelming
  • adept
  • digital devices
  • communicate
  • interact
  • resistant
  • knowledge
  • skills
  • reliance
  • divide
  • attitudes
  • privacy
  • online security
  • widening
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