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More and more people prefer to read ebooks rather than paper books. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause for libraries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays,
people
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 prefer reading electronic
books
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 to
paper
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books
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, there are some causes for that I think, and It leads to some problems for
libraries
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. From my perspective, I
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 think digital
books
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 are more convenient than
paper
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 ones. Not only that, but we
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 can save a lot of time and money as we don’t have to buy or hire
books
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 to read and go to
libraries
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.
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, a digital book on the website can carry a great deal of information I need.
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, we easily search and approach a lot of
paper
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books
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 for a short time with computers or smartphones.
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,
people
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 like reading e-
books
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 more than real
books
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. In my opinion, owing to the factors above, it causes some problems for the
libraries
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. One of them is that
people
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 will be bored with the library
books
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, so
libraries
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 have fewer
people
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. In my opinion, some
libraries
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 will “bankrupt”.
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, most
libraries
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 in the world live on selling
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, so some of them can not hold on.
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, we can skip some advantages
libraries
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 bring for us
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 as reading and relaxing in
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, having large, quiet spaces, and studying with friends. I know that because I used to be a person who usually went to a library to study near my house. In my memory, there are a good
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 of
people
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 who went there to study and read
books
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, at that moment, it didn’t have anything. But with the development of technology, the
number
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 of smartphones raised quickly,
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, the internet and electronic
books
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 were born,
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, the
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 of
people
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 who went to
libraries
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 decreased, including me. In conclusion, it is a common issue, in my perspective, if it is not solved, the
number
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 of
people
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 who prefers to read
paper
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books
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 will be decreased or
libraries
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 can be forgotten.

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