You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter •say which part-time course you booked •explain why you need to cancel your booking •ask about booking a different course Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, Good morning, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am going to cancel my part-time

course

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that I have booked prior today. I have booked the Accounting part-time

course

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, which will be held every Monday from 3 PM to 5 PM. Unfortunately, I couldn’t attend the

course

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due to

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the part-time

course

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being crashed with my main schedule. Regarding that, I have to prioritize my main college schedule utmost. After some consideration, I am going to book another

course

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and plan to take finance as the substitute

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. From what I have seen, finance is the only

course

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that

match

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into

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my personal and college schedule,

as well as

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finance will

be complimented

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my major courses. I wonder if it is possible to change it? Please let me know

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if there is anything I could do to change. Thank you.

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Grammar

Be mindful of minor grammatical errors, such as 'I am going to cancel my part-time course that I have booked prior today.' It should be 'prior to today.'

Grammar

Clarify sentences to enhance readability. For example, 'the part-time course being crashed with my main schedule' could be revised to 'the part-time course conflicting with my main schedule.'

Content

The letter provides a complete response by covering all the required points: the course booked, the reason for cancellation, and a query about booking another course.

Tone

The tone of the letter is appropriate for a formal request and is polite and respectful.

Structure

The letter is well-organized with a clear logical structure and separate paragraphs for each point.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

154 words

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