Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebration, while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

One of the social concerns today relates to spending

money

on family

celebration

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.

While

it is often argued that it is important to spend a

lot

of

money

on family

celebration

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celebrations

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, others believe it is a waste of

money

. Actually, some

celebration

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can help family

members

link together but too many

party

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parties

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once

years

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year

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can make

our

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us

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become poor quickly, I agree

spending

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to spend

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money

on family

clebration

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celebrations

unless burning

money

. On the one hand, it is argued that spending a

lot

of

money

on family

celebration

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is really crucial. The main reason is that Family

celebration

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can be lookalike a good way to link

members

of

family

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the family

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. It is

also

possible to say that today when the social is increasing quickly everyone

seem

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to be too busy to have a meal with their family, they even never do it unless some special

celebration

of family.

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, my uncle who is living in

USA

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hardly

go

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goes

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back to Viet Nam visit family unless some

family’s

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family

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special

celebration

like

feast

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a feast

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or wedding of a member. Another reason is spending

money

on that

celebration

can be lookalike an occasion for

famiy

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family

members

to entertain and relax together.

For example

,

according to

a

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apply

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cultural and geography research about West South Viet Nam people which

is perform

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by 4 students of Vietnamese Scientific Study, they give

some

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information that in West South Viet Nam people usually celebrate

birthday

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and feasts not only

to

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ancestor remembrance or happy

birthday

their family

members

but

also

to relax and entertain together.

On the other hand

, it is strongly believed by others that family

celebration

is really too wasted and so

unecessary

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unnecessary

. People often have

this

opinion because for rich man a

lot

of

money

seem

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to be too short to make them feel regret,

however

for the

poor

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it’s

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an unacepted

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unacepted

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unaccepted

thing, for rich man a

lot

of

money

is

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spent on

celebration

can be only a tool to entertain but the poor look it alike a large

money

which they can only see in

dream

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a dream

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. In fact,

poor

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the poor

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man

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men

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really

have

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more

thing

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things

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to have

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have

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to spend cash like hospital

fee

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fees

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, tuition

fee

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fees

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or

tax

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taxes

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althought

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although

their salary is too short and they seem can’t

pay

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for it .A particularly good example here is

last

swing I had a charity journey with school and that gave me a memorable opportunity to talk to the poor

live

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in our province, for them having a

Birthday

with a cake seem just can appear when they fall into a beautiful dream, it’s too difficult with their short

money

, in their village

birthday

or another family party is only

an

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a

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usual day. In conclusion,

celebration

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a celebration

the celebration

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of

family

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the family

a family

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is believed to be crucial by someone, for

others

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,others

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it is

money-wasted

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money wasted

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.Personally, I tend to believe that some

celebration

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can help family

members

link together but too many

party

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parties

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once

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a years

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years

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year

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can make

our

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us

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become poor quickly, I agree

spending

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to spend

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money

on family

clebration

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celebration

unless burning

money

.