Some people think sending criminals to prison is an effective way to deal with them. Others think education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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on going
discussion Correct your spelling
ongoing
with
how to Change preposition
about
dealing
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deal
criminals
.A group of individual
claims the most effective way is Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
sent
them to learn Change the verb form
to send
education
.While
other
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others
the
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apply
criminals
should sent
to jail.In my view, Change the verb form
be sent
criminals
should have access to education
and learn employability skill
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skills
term
of imprisonment,Add an article
the term
while
criminals
who had committed a serious and unforgivable crime
should be deprived of this
right.
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is a positive method to encourage criminal
and train them to live in normal life.It can provide Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
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a second
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a criminal
the criminal
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criminals
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confusion
In other words
, criminals
can learn employability skill
in prison Fix the agreement mistake
skills
then
they can start a new life after term
of imprisonment with their Add an article
the term
a term
skill
.Fix the agreement mistake
skills
Additionally
, education
can reduce the rate of second
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a second
crime
.For example
,research supossed
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supposed
people
who had doing illegal activities before will commit Correct word choice
that people
second
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a second
the second
crime
but education
can prevent it.
On the other hand
,education
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every Change preposition
for
criminals
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criminal
criminal
who had Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
murder
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a murder
crime
.They usually have some mental problem so Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
education
can’t help them to change their mind,and mental problem is difficult to treat.Ther fore
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Therefore
release
them will let society Wrong verb form
releasing
under
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in
dangerous
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danger
such
as they killed other
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others
these situation
,prison is suitable for them,it is Change the determiner
this situation
these situations
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a low
low cost
method,and they will Add a hyphen
low-cost
under
control to prevent the possibility of them Add a missing verb
be under
futher
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further
harm
others.
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harming
To
conclusion,Change preposition
In
education
is suitable for criminal
who commit slight Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
crime
like Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
steal
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stealing
item
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items
shop
.It can help them integrate into society after punishment.Fix the agreement mistake
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The prison
also
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is also
an
indispensable where to control Correct article usage
apply
criminals
who will hurt other
again.I believe combining these two approaches is the best Fix the agreement mistake
others
solutionl
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solution
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