Some people think sending criminals to prison is an effective way to deal with them. Others think education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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with
criminals
.A group of
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claims the most effective way is
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them to learn
education
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believe that
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criminals
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to jail.In my view,
criminals
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education
and learn employability
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during
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of imprisonment,
while
criminals
who had committed a serious and unforgivable
crime
should be deprived of
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right. On the one hand,
education
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and train them to live in normal life.It can provide
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chance to
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a criminal
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criminal
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criminals
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who made a mistake in a moment of
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confusion
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In other words
,
criminals
can learn employability
skill
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in prison
then
they can start a new life after
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of imprisonment with their
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.
Additionally
,
education
can reduce the rate of
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crime
.
For example
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that people
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who had doing illegal activities before will commit
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crime
but
education
can prevent it.
On the other hand
,
education
is not suitable
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every
criminals
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criminal
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especially
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criminals
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who had
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a murder
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or other serious
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.They usually have some mental problem so
education
can’t help them to change their mind,and mental problem is difficult to treat.
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,
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them will let society
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dangerous
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such
as they killed
other
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again.In
these situation
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,prison is suitable for them,it is
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low cost
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method,and they will
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control to prevent the possibility of them
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others.
To
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conclusion,
education
is suitable for
criminal
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criminals
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who commit slight
crime
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crimes
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like
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item
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items
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from
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.It can help them integrate into society after punishment.
Prison
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also
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is also
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indispensable where to control
criminals
who will hurt
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others
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again.I believe combining these two approaches is the best
solutionl
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solution
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