Transport delays and long journey times are widespread phenomena in many cites today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved.

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It has become a common problem nowadays where people have to allocate
time
for at least double the amount of their original
time
if they want to reach
one
place on
time
. There are various possible reasons that can explain
this
situation and
this
essay will try to explain a few
along with
its
solution
.
Firstly
, it is undeniable that the
number
of private transport keeps increasing throughout the years.
Due to
its simplicity
along with
the affordable cost of gas,
one
individual could own at least
one
car or motorcycle.
This
phenomenon increase traffics and impacts public
transportation
which is provided by the government.
In addition
, the limited
number
of public
transportation
and its bad
management
also
play a role in causing the delay problem.
For example
, the ways that were specifically created for busways in Jakarta, are often used by the public.
Hence
, it is impossible for them to arrive on
time
.
Furthermore
, some routes only provide a bus once every hour, which means that we have to wait for another hour if the previous bus is full.
One
clear
solution
is to increase the
number
of public
transportation
, which can be possible through taxes that are collected by the government. Another possible
solution
is to correct the
management
of these public accommodations.
For example
, in Tokyo, the metros and trains are available every 1-2 minutes and have been well managed for quite some
time
. By doing that, more and more people prefer to use public
transportation
instead
of their own vehicles.
To conclude
, the main reasons are probably
due to
a limited
number
of vehicles and bad
management
.
Whereas
for the
solution
, it can eradicate by increasing the amount of public
transportation
and correcting the
management
itself.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Congestion
  • Traffic gridlock
  • Mass transit
  • Commuting
  • Rush hour
  • Carpooling
  • Traffic management
  • Sustainable transportation
  • Rapid transit systems
  • Integrated transport network
  • Smart city initiatives
  • Bottleneck
  • Ride-sharing
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