Nowadays
is a very popular gadget, almost everyone
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a daily
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. Many
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of
time
on their screens,
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in numerous severe problems and
that is
the reason why
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believe excessive phone usage is
a negative development.
It is a fact that the amount of
time
spent on
phones
has increased sharply
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last
decades. Not
adults, but
also
children
spend a large part of their day on smartphones.
That is
mostly
they have nothing else to do. If
children
are not
in beneficial activities like
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or art, they will mostly search
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source
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to spend their energy on and to
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their needs
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. Another reason is that many parents have no
time
and
for their
, so they try to keep them busy with mobile
phones
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spent
time
on
phones
.
It cannot be denied that the consequences of that behaviour are very serious. Spending many hours on
phones
can lead to several mental and physical maladies. It is scientifically proven that watching short videos for
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period of
time
will harm the
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brain,
it makes their thinking superficial which in turn lead to a lower IQ.
Children
will
also
tend to have no social interaction
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unless the spent
time
on screens is limited.
Thus
, I profoundly believe that
this
development is
.
In sum, excessive Phone utilization
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children
has many reasons,
such
as lack of
attention.
This
may lead to many negative effects, namely,
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poor health. To my way of thinking
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bad behaviour that should be limited