Some children spend hours everyday on their smatphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays

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smartphones

is a very popular gadget, almost everyone

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a daily

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. Many

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children

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of

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on their screens,

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often

watching short videos, which

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in numerous severe problems and

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the reason why

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believe excessive phone usage is

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absolutely

a negative development. It is a fact that the amount of

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spent on

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has increased sharply

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decades. Not

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adults, but

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children

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spend a large part of their day on smartphones.

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mostly

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because

they have nothing else to do. If

children

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are not

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engaged

in beneficial activities like

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or art, they will mostly search

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source

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to spend their energy on and to

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their needs

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amusment

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amusement

. Another reason is that many parents have no

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and

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patience

for their

childrens

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children

children's

, so they try to keep them busy with mobile

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or tablets in order to get extra

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for what they think is more important. That

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to an increase in the length of

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spent

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on

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. It cannot be denied that the consequences of that behaviour are very serious. Spending many hours on

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can lead to several mental and physical maladies. It is scientifically proven that watching short videos for

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period of

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will harm the

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brain,

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it makes their thinking superficial which in turn lead to a lower IQ.

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tend to have no social interaction

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unless the spent

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on screens is limited.

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, I profoundly believe that

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development is

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negative

. In sum, excessive Phone utilization

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children

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has many reasons,

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as lack of

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attention.

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may lead to many negative effects, namely,

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poor health. To my way of thinking

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is

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bad behaviour that should be limited