Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. (Terlepas dari manfaatnya bagi kesehatan, lebih sedikit orang saat ini daripada sebelumnya yang berolahraga dengan berjalan kaki.) Why is this? What can be done to encourage more walking?
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There are more
people
who exercise by walking nowadays, rather than before, but it is out of a healthy body. This
essay will discuss the underlying factors and some solutions to tackle this
problem by encouraging more individuals to do that.
In recent days, there are a number of reasons why society spends its time
without access to health activities. To begin
with, people
who are extremely busy in their workplace from morning until night return back to their home by driving a vehicle rather than walking. It happens during their work day and it becomes a habit. Subsequently
, people
who are addicted to technology such
as gadgets. They will waste time
playing social media a whole day in a room or place that is
convenient for them. As a result
, people
these days think of doing other activities that they feel are more interesting than going outside on foot.
This
issue must be tackled by people
or the government so that it can be more acceptable for human beings. Firstly
, authorities provide some events to invite lots of people
to join that festival. For example
, celebrate Independence Day by walking together around the city. Secondly
, individuals can change their habit to routine exercise if they have free or leisure time
such
as on Saturday morning. In addition
, it will affect them if they are ordinary. Finally
, it becomes a habit that people
do and over time
they can feel that it is essential.
In conclusion, some aspects that impact people
who do not do that activity are based on their daily activities. Therefore
, there are many solutions to get over that matter.Submitted by gabriellasada24 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
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Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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