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You live with a roommate at university, but you have trouble studying because of a problem related to your roommate. Write a letter to an administrator at your university and include: Who you are The problem What you suggest they do

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Dear Mr. Jose, Hope you are doing great and in radiant health.
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 is Nav, a first-year student in the Chemical Engineering department. Currently, I am residing in the student residents on a sharing basis.
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, I am facing numerous problems in the shared room.
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 with, my roommate is a student in the art department. So, most of her study work is practical.
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, she always plays music
while
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 studying which gives me a very hard time during study.
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, I cannot sleep properly because her classes start in the afternoon because of that she goes to bed at late night,
while
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, I have morning classes.
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, I request you to come forward and tackle
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 situation. Either you can tell her to use headphones
while
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 playing music and turn off the light at a time or allot me a single seater room. So, that I can concentrate on my studies and sleep properly. Awaiting your response and let me know if you have any concerns.
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 faithful, Navjot Kaur

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accommodation
  • residential advisor
  • disruptive
  • concentration
  • mediation
  • compliance
  • amicable
  • tenable
  • rectify
  • study habits
  • commons area
  • quiet hours
  • academic achievement
  • cohabitation
  • lifestyle conflict
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