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In recent years, artificial intelligence has gained popularity, with some suggesting that it has the potential to bring about significant changes in human society. Why is this happening? Do you believe this trend has a positive or negative impact?

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Nowadays, artificial intelligence become more and more popular, which may change our lifestyle
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 the industrial structure in the near future. The reasons why it happens are because of the advancements in technologies and numerous people diving into
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 industry
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 its potential of making profits from Al
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 may have a negative impact on the next generation with the damage it might cause in the educational system.
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, the reasons why Al
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become
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 famous are because
technological
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 progress in computer science and engineering
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give birth to artificial intelligence
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 well-known application Chat-GBT. The success of
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 Al program attracts thousands of businessmen to invest their money and time in developing new fancy Al products.
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, Google just announced that they plan to put Al
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, in the foreseeable future, office workers don’t need to type their own email, cause Al will sure to do the work for them and write the letters perfectly without difficulties.
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, with the fast development of Al
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, I believe it may cause a negative impact on education. Plagiarism has always been a serious issue in higher education.
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, students nowadays can use AI robots in helping them write their final essays without even bothering with
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 behaviour associated with cheating.
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, many elite universities now banned students to use AI in writing their dissertations.
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, many professors are still quite suspicious about the fairness and reliance of their student’s essays. In conclusion,
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 essay believes the fast-developing AI
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 millions of engineers coming to the industry and the products made a big profit for them.
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, despite the convenience of Al can bring, it may
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 cost a serious concern for the education system.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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