Inspite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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, personally, I am in thought that advancement in technology has brought more harm than benefit. The reason why I am writing
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is in my everyday life I witness numerous outcomes of the trend. Families are being broken owing to the cheating of spouses on each other through the internet.
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easy access to social media. When it comes to agriculture, new chemicals are being developed using modern technology and they, in turn, damage our genes via gene modifiers. In conclusion, improvement in science and IT can never bring any good to us. We should not forget
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both now and in the future as our predecessors will continue living on
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planet after our generation. They have full rights to live in a better place than us.
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