Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to him to tell him that you cannot go to the theatre. In your letter:  Apologize  Explain the situation  Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket

Dear Nile, I am glad to know that you bought tickets for me for the theatre for Saturday's evening show. Unfortunately, I have to cancel that plan for some family matter.

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, please accept my apology for not being able to join you that day. Actually, Yesterday night my brother got sick and has to be hospitalized late at night. After performing some tests the doctor found the hernia in worse condition and advised us to do the surgery as soon as possible. So, the earliest appointment was found on Saturday evening. As you know that our parents are living in another city and they will not be able to come on

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short notice. I mean time, I have to be with him during the operation. So, I hope you understand my condition and forgive me. I want you to take Kevin on that show he was going to join me during the operation but I alone can handle it here. I will inform him to see you on Saturday afternoon. Soon we will make another plan for the outing. Yours lovingly, Mandeep Singh

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