Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that wildlife has no use in the 21st century, and in that
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preserving those species would be a waste of means.
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statement. Wild animals have
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their
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to remain
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a crucial role in our lives.
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, the preservation of wildlife is key to our understanding of nature and its beauty Wild animals have a significant impact on the environment and cannot be replaced
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eliminated. Their death could mean the end of multiple other creatures and plants feeding on them
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could mean the end of a self-regulating system called the food chain.
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, a bird named blue feathered crow originating from Indonesia, nearly went extinct after
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corporation in 2005 that decided to exploit its natural habitat. The company judged
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as a minor issue that shall not discontinue the exploitation process
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, the birds went nearly extinct, and over the
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insect swarms took over cities. In that
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the only predator regulating the insect’s expansion was the
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crow. Wildlife is useful in every aspect of life, and for the human species, it is key to understand it and get inspired by it to live. Keeping living forms alive means an opportunity to see the world differently by having more knowledge about the world that surrounds us. It can be a great benefit when it comes to creating and evolving.
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, a Japanese artist in 2007 saved a particular kind of salamander,
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was in danger
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its poisonous bite being a threat to small children. The artist remarked that the amphibian emitted beautiful sounds. The artist used recordings of those sounds to use them to make music that became viral on social media. The salamander
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became a protected living form and is still used to make movie songs. In conclusion, every lifeform has its own importance and cannot be ignored. There are functions that they play which are key to
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survival, personal creations and appreciation.

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Strengthen your introduction by clearly stating your opinion and outlining your main points.
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Incorporate more details to clarify your ideas and make them easier to understand.
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You provided strong examples of wildlife's role in both the ecosystem and human creativity.
coherence and cohesion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes your stance on the importance of wildlife.

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