“Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?”
It is widely acknowledged that natural disasters have an
unforgetable
impact on Correct your spelling
unforgettable
people
in many countries
which may not ready
for unforeseen disasters Add a missing verb
be ready
due to
massive earthquake
, Fix the agreement mistake
earthquakes
Add an article
the fire
fire
Fix the agreement mistake
fires
of
Change preposition
apply
woodlans
or Correct your spelling
woodlands
woodland
shortage
of food and they may need help from the world. Fix the agreement mistake
shortages
This
essay totally agree with this
statement that affected these
Correct determiner usage
apply
countries
may not cope with these situation
Change the determiner
this situation
these situations
by
any unknown reason and Change preposition
for
people
should not be let
alone Correct your spelling
left
into
Change preposition
in
theirs
destiny. Correct the word
their
This
essay aims to explore why developed countries
support people
after havocs
and will provide supporting examples to arrive at a reasoned conclusion.
Fix the agreement mistake
havoc
Firstly
, the countries
` border
are important to prevent enemies. Fix the agreement mistake
borders
In addition
, many of them try to fight
keep Add the particle
tofight
this
line from the
danger even if it may result Correct article usage
apply
with
war. Change preposition
in
However
, despiteCorrect determiner usage
these
this
reasons, humanitarian relief should be kept a
different category. BecauseChange preposition
in a
,
the Remove the comma
apply
influenced
Replace the word
influence
by
disasters may lock Change preposition
of
countries
services to remedy their problems. Change noun form
countries'
country's
Moreover
, in the
modern times, Correct article usage
apply
media
can provide Correct article usage
the media
their
situation that we let them alone their destiny. Change the pronoun
the
For example
, after massive
explosion by an accident in Beirut, the city had lack of Correct article usage
a massive
any
emergency services. Correct quantifier usage
apply
However
, despite watching like a reality show by world
, many nations gave their hand.
Another important fact is humanity. Developed Add an article
the world
countries
always care human
life and the relief help to gain more prestige in the world. Humans satisfy to help other Change preposition
about human
people
that
it is a type of Correct word choice
apply
rehabilition
and Correct your spelling
rehabilitation
represent
our Correct subject-verb agreement
represents
strongness
. Replace the word
strength
Moreover
, the nations are constitute
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are constituted
by
Change preposition
of
people
which
include Correct pronoun usage
who
same
characterization. Change the article
the same
Therefore
, countries
gives
reaction as their members do. Change the verb form
give
For instance
, after a traffic accident, people
collect and help each other, it is same
Correct article usage
the same
like
Change preposition
as
countries
. They connect and try to send their aids.
In conclusion, based on the information provided earlier, it can be deduced that nations should help each other for humanity and prestige.Submitted by haturk10 on
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