The maps below show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today.

The maps below show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today.
The maps demonstrate some changes to Colwick Arts Centre from 2005 to
present
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. Generally,
it is clear that
the
campus
has experienced considerable changes during the period shown. The most remarkable difference between
two
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maps is the appearance of the outdoor exhibition and new areas. As can be seen from the maps, in the middle, the concert hall and cinema have been separated and moved to the top right-hand corner of the
campus
. In 2005, the restroom located on the southwest side of the
campus
was downsized and moved to the opposite side of the
center
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-
while
a cafe was constructed next to the gallery and information desk, replacing the toilet in the past. In the top left corner of the area, the snack bar has been demolished and replaced with two meeting rooms. Turning to the other features, the wasteland has been planted with more trees and has become the stage for the
campus
. Now, a new drama studio was built, located between meeting room 1 and the cinema. Another difference is that it has two galleries in the north but now they only have 1 as it has been merged and moved to the opposite side, next to the meeting rooms. In conclusion,
this
campus
has developed and is
more
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upgraded.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words campus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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