An increasing number of people want to buy clothes, shoes, and other items produced by famous international brands. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?
It is a common
practice
that most people
tend to buy internationally branded items compared to other local brands
because of familiarity and other reasons. I think it’s neither good practice
nor bad practice
because the quality
of a product
varies in different brands
. I will further
explain my opinion in the below essay.
Many people
buy such
international brands
mainly because they believe the products
manufactured in some developed countries are resilient and trustworthy compared to other local brands
. It’s also
general psychology that people
easily like things which are hyped and advertised to be luxurious. Hence
, such
practices are increasing. Moreover
, in some ,cases this
is true as well because some locally manufactured products
cannot meet the quality
some international brands
provide. Hence
, people
trust internationally branded products
commonly.
This
is neither a good practice
nor a bad practice
because the quality
of a product
differs from brand
to brand
. There are some local brands
which provide better quality
than international brands
and also
some internationally branded products
promises better performance than other. For example
, all smart mobiles manufactured by the company ‘Apple’ are expensive, but ,still more people
buy those phones because of their performance and quality
. Likewise
, when it comes to clothing or any other item, there are better shops which sell high-quality
cotton dresses compared to established stores like H&M, Gap, etc. Therefore
, I believe we cannot generalize the product
quality
based on brand
.
In conclusion, although
international brands
provide better quality
and durability in most cases, some local brands
also
provide better quality
products
in some brands
. Hence
, we should give preference to the quality
of the product
irrespective of the brand
and buy things which justify the price and quality
promised.Submitted by hemaecengineer on
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task response
Ensure that your introduction and conclusion clearly state your position and summarize your main points. Use topic sentences to introduce each main point in your body paragraphs. Aim for better paragraph development and clarity in your ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has a logical structure and supported main points, but your introduction and conclusion could be more explicit. In addition, work on improving the flow of ideas within each paragraph by using appropriate transition words and ensuring coherence between sentences.