You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. Introduce yourself Describe your plans for the party Invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Mr Ali, We just have moved here with my brother and I am writing a letter to inform you that I am arranging a party in my new home in the upcoming week.

However

, I am bothered, because it might be noisy and disturb you a little bit. I want to introduce myself my name is Ahsan and I am working in a national bank. I live with my brother in the 234 number apartment. I want to tell you about my celebration plan. Actually, my brother got a new job as a teacher in a high school, so we decided to celebrate

this

. There are many people we will invite to the celebration. I

also

invite you to my brother’s celebration and I am sure you have a good time.

In addition

, the party start at 6 o’clock evening at 10 o’clock at night.

Moreover

, do not be late. When you come to the party, we already managed all things. I look forward to catching up with you soon. You sincerely, Ahsan Islam

Submitted by ahsanislam96 on Wed Jul 05 2023

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