You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. Introduce yourself Describe your plans for the party Invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Mr Ali, We just have moved here with my brother and I am writing a letter to inform you that I am arranging a party in my new home in the upcoming week.

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, I am bothered, because it might be noisy and disturb you a little bit. I want to introduce myself my name is Ahsan and I am working in a national bank. I live with my brother in the 234 number apartment. I want to tell you about my celebration plan. Actually, my brother got a new job as a teacher in a high school, so we decided to celebrate

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. There are many people we will invite to the celebration. I

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invite you to my brother’s celebration and I am sure you have a good time.

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, the party start at 6 o’clock evening at 10 o’clock at night.

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, do not be late. When you come to the party, we already managed all things. I look forward to catching up with you soon. You sincerely, Ahsan Islam

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

175 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

housewarming
neighbourhood
settle in
concern
apologize
disturbance
kindly
considerate
join
gathering
introduce
socialize
appreciate
understanding

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