your child is going on a school trip abroad for three days and the headmaster of the school has asked anyparents if they would like to come along to assist.you would like to go . write a letter to the headmaster. say why you woud like to go? Suggest what you could do to help during the trip? ask some further questions about the trip?

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Dear Mr Raj, I am writing

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letter to inform you about a decision to go on a trip with my kid. My name is Kanchan and I am a mother of XYZ.

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last

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week I received your letter which was about a three-day trip to Canada. I went through it, and I am happy to join you based on some reasons. First of all, XYZ was afraid of darkness, he never slept alone.

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, he is suffering from anxiety, and the doctor suggested not to leave him alone in any way.

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, If I will be there I can take care of him,

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I can assist you and your staff to handle the other students too.

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, I am very fond of cooking, I can cook food

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the age group of children.

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, if you want me to join

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journey, please give me some instructions

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as what to pack, when to leave and arrive,

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do I need to pay any fees for it. Looking forward to your positive response. Thank you Yours sincerely,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

185 words

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